12 february of 2001
For a long time, I wake up without nightmares in my mind. Whatever I do my memories came back to hung me or maybe to remember me to not make the wrong choice. I get up with great difficulty and walk to my library, it's my sanctuary. With a cup of tea and my old journal, I try to kill my demons and my demons, as you can see, they're my memories. Every time I close my eyes I see this world with no colors, full of sadness. I call this world "1984". I see myself when I was young afraid by cameras which looks like the eyes of demons. My parents told me that they would be there forever but they lied to me, they abandoned me in this cold world. I grew up in this world, these same eyes scrutinized me everywhere, at home, at work or in the street. I felt trapped and so alone. People around me don't pay attention to me, I had to take care of myself and build my life without help. When I became an adult nothing had changed, just the fact that I had to look like a robot. No emotions, no questions, just work. But the more I grew up, the more I wanted to learn about this world and I think that they were right. Ignorance is strength. If you knew more that you had to know you were in danger. The world "1984" is in danger. And you have to die... This is what happens with the only friend that I made, Simon. He was like me, in constant search of truth. One day, I think he was too close of the light of "truth" that he never came back. And one more time in my life someone left me with demons.
I think that a really good story, because I find there are many details, and we can imagine the scene, that unfolds in our head.
ReplyDeleteFor me, we feel more emotions in this text. Furthermore Winston insists more on the people around him which once too close to the truth disappeared. I really like this one.
ReplyDeleteI really liked this text, especially the part about the fact that ignorance is strength and knowing too much can be dangerous.
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ReplyDeleteI think it's my favorite text because we can really feel winston's emotion. Elisa explain us the situation without used the words of the textand that very great.
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ReplyDeleteI enjoyed reading your redaction because I found it simple to understand and at the time very detailed because it is good written, with a good reference to the title.
ReplyDeleteI think it's a very good story, because we feel emotions of Winston's life. You write a lot of details so we can imagine the story of Winston.
ReplyDeleteFor me this texte is the best because we feel the feelings of Winston and we can easily put ourselves in place so congratulation Elisa :)
ReplyDeleteThe story is very good beacause wie are immerse in this story there is very details and there is of emotion in this story.
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